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  1. Thanks very much, guys, for the great input. I was intentionally vague in my description to see if people would know what was happening. The guy is supposed to be her coworker friend who doesn't want to see her quit, but I don't think anyone got that from what I drew. Frames 1-20 are supposed to show her writing the final exclamation point, then jabbing the pen into her boss's picture. Seems like I missed the mark a bit, huh? Rodney: Good point about trimming it back to meet the deadline. In this case it would help to be able to shift those seconds to other parts of the animation, too. Your comment on pacing is good. To make it less frantic and more readable I may experiment with opening with a close shot of the pen sticking out of the picture and the girl out of focus in the background with that evil expression on her face, then shift focus in on her face before the guy starts talking. That could be really cool. The staging needs a lot of help. I initially just started drawing to get some ideas down. David: I completely agree about needing more time to show the girl's satisfied expression. If the beginning is changed, I can steal some time and put it here. That would work well. Rob: I had the same thoughts about why she would have her boss's picture on the cube wall, but if she was psycho enough it might be plausible. Thanks for the great drawing and ideas regarding camera angles and dynamic composition (I think that's what Rodney was saying too). Your suggestion of camera position B works really well, especially if I were to open with a closeup of the picture and possibly her hand jabbing the pen into it, then pull back or shift focus to see her sitting back in the chair. Nice! What do you think? Your idea of having her stay turned away from him sounds good too. I was making her "throw" the words "an outline" at him because of her intonation. The same effect could be used without her actually facing him, though. Good stuff! Now I'm off to rework some things. I'll try to get a modified version up in the next few days, if you guys wouldn't mind checking back again for another look. Mark
  2. Doubt I'll be able to finish this in time, but would still like to hear your thoughts... specifically related to: 1. Concept 2. Readability 3. Pacing 4. Staging These are coworkers, and the picture on the wall behind the girl is her manager. It's rough, but should be enough for you "directors" to evaluate. Thanks! Mark (1.6Mb, Sorenson 3 Mov.) TestRender1d.mov
  3. Hey David, that's really impressive! Excellent work.... as always.
  4. No rush, Mark. Whenever you get the time.
  5. Hey Mark, Just wanted you to know I like the rigs you've been working on. Haven't been very active with A:M lately, but gave your rigs a spin and they are really nice. The face controls are simple and work great... good expression and control. Did you mention there's an install rig you've had a few people test? I've got a little time and would like to give it a whirl if there's something close to being finished.
  6. There would also be a suction tube right next to the tooth to evacuate the water spray/tooth shavings. How about sucking the spray into an opaque white tube? That would look cleaner to the patient, also.
  7. Hi Eric, Did the dentist specifically ask to see the shavings flying off the tooth and the tooth preparation process? I wonder if it might be less intimidating/frightening for the patient if you showed a model of the tooth before preparation, then just fade the picture into the finally prepared tooth. The patient shouldn't have to see the drill to know how the reduction gets done. This would make your job easier and might be more effective at selling the procedure anyway. You could then just animate the veneer being fit to place and end on a perfectly modelled tooth/arch. Mark
  8. Hey Xtaz, Here are some things you might want to consider.... There is almost constant motion throughout your animation, with a lot of unnecessary movement that doesn't help tell the story. This clip begs for some holds or pauses in the action. Also, the mechanics of the animation itself is "floaty" or spliney looking. Maybe if you turn off the sound and watch the clip over and over, you will see what I mean. Step back from the small details and mechanics of the animation for a moment and look at the big picture. I think it would be helpful to break the clip down into "beats", or ideas. At most, there are about three beats to this clip: 1. "I thought.... that if I could help him in some way, 2. get him this, uh, this girl that he loves... 3. that maybe, you know..... *sniff* ....things would ch... change for me." If I were animating this, I'd concentrate on getting one great pose or gesture per beat and really focus on making sure those poses sold the story, even without sound. After getting those main poses working you can add whatever movements you absolutely need to get from one pose to the next, as long as they relate to what the character would actually be doing while saying this line. This character's feet are planted to the floor, too. It would be appropriate for him to move toward the camera during the first two beats as he's trying to sell his point, then to settle back in beat three as he admits things didn't go as he'd planned. What workflow are you using? Are you going from blocked to linear to splined so you are controlling the curves? I know there are many ways to clean up your animation, but this seems to be a good workflow to help avoid the floaty look. Anyway, I just wanted to point out some things that I think you might be called-out on later. Take if for what it's worth. Good luck with this piece! Mark
  9. OpenOffice is the answer to your problems, Dhar. It's free and works great. It has word processing, spreadsheets, and lots more. http://www.openoffice.org/
  10. Thank you, Rusty, for posting this great checklist. It should be a big help. Mark
  11. Outstanding modeling and texturing job, Stian. I've flown both gas and electric R/C heli's and it's a blast. Please be sure to spend a lot of time on a good heli simulator before attempting anything other than tail-in hovering, unless you want to spend a lot of money and time in repairs. Heli's have no stable orientation like a plane, so it's easy to get disoriented and lose control quickly.... usually with very bad results! Have a great time flying!
  12. Hi Steven, Sorry for the late reply. Thanks again for all of your hard work on this rig. Your excellent animation results speak for themselves as to the usefulness and ease of use of this rig. I'm still scratching my head about how, exactly, your expressions do what they do. Maybe someday I'll get more time to go over it and figure it out. The way you've made each control work both sides of the face simultaneously or individually is really great, and I'd like to make FACE do the same if possible.... if you don't mind? Thanks again, Mark
  13. Hi Steve, Is it possible to make the lip and cheek guides follow the same arc? Here's what I'm seeing now... the lip guides and cheek corners follow different paths, which causes the lips to collapse inward. Please take a look at the screenshot: The red lines indicate the current paths of the lip guide and cheek corner's movements. Ideally, the lip and cheek guides should follow the same path. The green line indicates the path that they should both follow (for this character). Sorry if I'm missing something here, like maybe a simple adjustment. My time is a bit short this weekend so it's kind of a hit-and-run analysis. What do you think, Steve?
  14. Hi Steve, Thanks for your continued tinkering with/perfecting the Head Gizmo. I won't have time to check out your new file until later this weekend, but look forward to trying to follow what you've done. Just so I'm clear on something... is it OK to lengthen the cheek retraction bones (to make a wider arc) as well as change the angle? Or should they be kept the same length and only the angle changed? Thanks, Mark
  15. Here's a quick example that uses a pose to force the CCheek Nulls to move in an arc, conforming to the shape of the head. If you view the CCheek nulls from the top view while moving the test slider you'll see what I mean. I don't know if it would be useful to you or not. simple_simon_stretchyguides_jawdepth_TestArcs.mdl I like the new position of the CJawDepth control.
  16. Those new stretchy guides are very cool! Simple and effective. That was a great idea. I found a copy of v11.1h, so I'll make an example for you to check out with a pose for arcing lip control nulls. You can use it or scrap it if you like. Mark
  17. Thanks for doing this. The jaw works great. The stuff you're accomplishing with expressions is bordeline voodoo, man. The only way to do this would be with expressions and implement them in the same way as my eyebrow forehead curvature calculation. That method is suited to the forehead as you won't need the eyebrows to be manually controllable in the Z axis. The lips are different: they need to be controllable on all axis. When you put an expression on any aspect of a model, you lose direct control over it. Therefore it limits the range of movement and expression and is an automation too far. In order to achieve an arc of motion, you need to adjust the Z axis translation curve in the timeline. Good enough. I may work up a V11i version of an idea for this for you to look at over the next day or so. Are you talking about the head's Z axis or the lip segment's Z axis? As a matter of interest, what would the advantage of either be? Hold down the 3 key in order to move the nulls on their own Z axis and the angle changes in relation to the jaw's position. I was talking about the lip segments. Your idea of holding down the 3 key works well enough.... thought that was only for CP's. It seemed like I was having to turn the model to an angle to get ahold of the null and get her moving in the Z-axis. I'll practice more. Thanks, Mark
  18. Hey Steve, there were a few things I wondered if you would consider adding to this rig. 1. A "Jaw forward/backward" control. 2. The ability to have the mouth controls (CCheek, CLipBot, etc.) move in an arc so that they conform to the shape of the head and face. 3. An easy way to move the mouth controls in the Z-axis. I played around with the first two ideas and came up with ways to accomplish them using poses. You could probably do a better job using expressions, but I'm not up on that stuff yet. There is a sample file attached that has two new poses: simple_simon_TestAdditions.zip 1. The "MouthCornerCurveOpen" pose works on the left CCheek, CLipBot, CLipTop controls and defines their positions to conform to the curvature of the head as the mouth goes to a wide (smile) position. This was just a quick test so it isn't activated when the CMouth control is moved, but that would be easy enough to fix. 2. The "JawForward/Backward" pose does just what it says and works on the XJaw bone. Again, this was just a test to see if it was easy to accomplish but you may have a better way of doing it that will be more stable with your existing rig. As for the Z-axis controls for the mouth controls, this could be easily done with poses but that would clutter up the interface and make things more complicated so maybe it's not worth doing. Can you or someone else think of an easy way to do this? See what you think. The setup is very nice and workable as you have it now. It's just fun to brainstorm. Mark
  19. Hey Steve, It's great to see you back "gizmo-ing" again. I'm sure you've been working on this rig for a long time. It's clear that a lot of thought went into it. I like the way you can do unilateral or bilateral controls easily. It's also great to see such a simple mesh layout and how nicely it deforms into some pretty great extremes. Your example shows off the potential really well. The fine lip controls are cool. Do you think this rig would work on a character with a huge jaw, like a dog or similar beast, or is it limited to a humanoid shaped head? Have you tested it on any other mesh designs? It looks like it works best on a very spline-lite model. I don't have any more time to play with him tonight, but I just wanted to congratulate you on another very cool invention! I look forward to playing with this more on the weekend. Thanks for sharing this with us! Mark
  20. Awesome work, Xtaz! How many hours do you estimate it took to model and texture this baby?
  21. This is really an attractive model... fun to look at and imagine what this character is going to act like. It's also one of those models that makes me slap my head and say, "why didn't I think of that". Very cool and well done!
  22. Awesome job on the modeling and texuring, guys! The detail is incredible. Mark
  23. That's it. Now it works like a charm. The new FACE interface additions are great, Mark. Absolutely. This is an incredibly functional and fun rig to use (and now fun to install too).
  24. Wow, you're fast! Thanks for hunting that one down.
  25. Hey Mark, I really like the new "Customize Interface" controls you added. That will make life easier. Thanks for bringing it to my attention because I wouldn't have seen it otherwise for awhile. I'm wondering what's going on with the FACE mesh now. In the model file the arrangement of the interface is somewhat scrambled. It appears to be not positioned properly at any of the Off, Joint or Split positions, either. The nulls are positioned correctly and appear to work fine, but the mesh is doing its own crazy thing. Have you noticed this? Edit: Here's what I found. It appears that the FACE mesh gets scrambled as soon as the install model is exported from the action. It's like the FACE Off position of the mesh is now saved as the default FACE mesh postion. Very odd!
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